tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post3921992634913136188..comments2023-05-15T06:01:22.990-05:00Comments on Promptly I Write: The PromiseSandrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-33283317106693821772012-04-27T11:48:18.714-05:002012-04-27T11:48:18.714-05:00Thank you so much, Gal! I'm hoping the secret ...Thank you so much, Gal! I'm hoping the secret will be revealed at the weekend challenge!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-43282785275001842742012-04-27T11:14:59.825-05:002012-04-27T11:14:59.825-05:00You captured the heavy weight of keeping a confide...You captured the heavy weight of keeping a confidence. Nicely done.The Gal Herselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02566779726191649848noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-26945094645607274182012-04-26T23:59:54.042-05:002012-04-26T23:59:54.042-05:00Thank you! Sometimes it's hard to know how mu...Thank you! Sometimes it's hard to know how much to tell and how much to leave out, but I'm thrilled that you want to see more! I sure will try.Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-41459378946813614022012-04-26T23:56:37.118-05:002012-04-26T23:56:37.118-05:00Thank you, Annabelle! I should admit it was not e...Thank you, Annabelle! I should admit it was not easy squeezing into the 333-word limit... I'm glad the ending worked for you!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-9318671472642921212012-04-26T23:53:52.684-05:002012-04-26T23:53:52.684-05:00There are a great many 'series' from other...There are a great many 'series' from other Trifectans (one of the great consequences of the 333-word limit)... dare I try one, too? I guess I'll have to see the next prompt to know! Thanks, Trifecta!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-42902377030911983502012-04-26T23:51:11.822-05:002012-04-26T23:51:11.822-05:00Well, am I ever glad that you were surprised. I g...Well, am I ever glad that you were surprised. I guess it did work! Thank you for reading my try at fiction.Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-10456435463762732912012-04-26T23:49:50.565-05:002012-04-26T23:49:50.565-05:00Thank you so much, Kim. Some prompts work with me...Thank you so much, Kim. Some prompts work with me and some just don't. At least this one went somewhere. Hope to see you at the weekend challenge!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-63411490863313900172012-04-26T20:54:22.306-05:002012-04-26T20:54:22.306-05:00What a suspenseful story you've written here. ...What a suspenseful story you've written here. It keeps you guessing and leaves you wanting more. Well done!Mrs. One Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13386318252760709869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-33007229348574486112012-04-26T19:18:38.433-05:002012-04-26T19:18:38.433-05:00Wow, very powerful take on keeping a confidence. ...Wow, very powerful take on keeping a confidence. The last line was perfect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-21804755466624019952012-04-26T15:06:02.375-05:002012-04-26T15:06:02.375-05:00Welcome back, Sandra. You build the suspense brill...Welcome back, Sandra. You build the suspense brilliantly in this one. I want to read the sequel to this. Will he tell her? Great response to the prompt.Trifectahttp://www.trifectawritingchallenge.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-9835666523212452722012-04-26T13:51:06.065-05:002012-04-26T13:51:06.065-05:00Wow, that was a surprise. I didn't even consid...Wow, that was a surprise. I didn't even consider the possibility that the patient whose secret he was keeping was related to her. Great entry this week.Rachaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391186958774991367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-29917017550929548472012-04-26T13:42:29.436-05:002012-04-26T13:42:29.436-05:00love this, very well done...
Very real.
Touching....love this, very well done...<br /><br />Very real.<br />Touching.<br />Sad.<br />Great story telling.Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01952571036204292945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-17241257490698637312012-04-25T20:08:44.307-05:002012-04-25T20:08:44.307-05:00Thanks, Tamyka! Kind of a downer, that's for s...Thanks, Tamyka! Kind of a downer, that's for sure. But I'm so glad you liked it. (Although it's completely fictional in my head, the heartache like this in real life is likely much more than I could imagine.)Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-25990900710083502212012-04-25T19:58:18.521-05:002012-04-25T19:58:18.521-05:00Sim, you're gonna be so hooked on Trifecta! B...Sim, you're gonna be so hooked on Trifecta! But I got stumped on a couple recently, and just got back into the game with this one. Great to have you with us!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-66634773913873962342012-04-25T19:23:09.676-05:002012-04-25T19:23:09.676-05:00This post is so heavy. It's laden with sorry. ...This post is so heavy. It's laden with sorry. Dripping! I love it. Thanks.Tamyka Bellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00068895518952927473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-49199444583857734562012-04-25T11:32:59.411-05:002012-04-25T11:32:59.411-05:00Your story moved me; what can I say?Your story moved me; what can I say?Sim Carterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07069681571808073102noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-16754134640200518092012-04-25T11:23:16.992-05:002012-04-25T11:23:16.992-05:00It is only a matter of time before she finds out. ...It is only a matter of time before she finds out. Hopefully she'll forgive him given his role as the physician, and the role of a husband who just went through similar heartache with her. Thank you for reading!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-32327785654766715092012-04-25T11:19:51.903-05:002012-04-25T11:19:51.903-05:00Thank you, Janna! I, too, wonder how long he can ...Thank you, Janna! I, too, wonder how long he can hold out; it's so hard to keep secrets from a spouse, at least for me! Definitely a struggle for this poor guy.Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-51998052741352799482012-04-25T07:48:01.621-05:002012-04-25T07:48:01.621-05:00Ooh painful. Secrets are hard. I wonder how she&...Ooh painful. Secrets are hard. I wonder how she'll feel when she does find and finds out that he knew beforehand. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-68890316822694796422012-04-24T22:56:18.921-05:002012-04-24T22:56:18.921-05:00This was an awesome story (sad subject, but well-w...This was an awesome story (sad subject, but well-written). I was torn - part of me wanted him to break the rules and tell her, but the other part of me cheered him on that he had the character to stick to his oath and word.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-3938413833171018102012-04-24T21:55:14.859-05:002012-04-24T21:55:14.859-05:00I'm terribly sorry that happened. I checked my...I'm terribly sorry that happened. I checked my settings and 'anyone' should be able to respond?! Thank you, and I'm glad to be back. I have not dabbled in fiction much, so this took me way longer than I'd like to admit. I'm glad you liked it!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-41636403953522642302012-04-24T21:52:58.307-05:002012-04-24T21:52:58.307-05:00Perhaps that's why people stay away from havin...Perhaps that's why people stay away from having relatives/friends as their physicians, although in many cases that can be a really good thing, too. Thank you so much!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-16493475747563849262012-04-24T21:50:46.383-05:002012-04-24T21:50:46.383-05:00Thank you! His are tough shoes to be in, that'...Thank you! His are tough shoes to be in, that's for sure.Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-12029210627509843762012-04-24T21:49:39.205-05:002012-04-24T21:49:39.205-05:00They are both equally detestable, aren't they?...They are both equally detestable, aren't they? And yet, he can escape neither. Thank you for your kind comments!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2705422401751057656.post-23523836498343102422012-04-24T21:48:36.895-05:002012-04-24T21:48:36.895-05:00When I saw the phrase, 'in confidence', th...When I saw the phrase, 'in confidence', the first thing I thought of was 'doctor-patient confidentiality', so I just went from there. Thank you so much!Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16187306461239093068noreply@blogger.com